It was a long time ago there was a little penguin she was a nice and happy penguin but she had one issue. She knew the whole town by heart except for the amusement park, but that all changed the next day.
One day her mom asked her to take her little sister to the amusement park because they got free tickets. She was too scared to say no so she went. Later on in the day she finally started to enjoy herself there. They went on many rides, they went on loop the loop rides, curly rides, spinning rides and many more. But when the sun started to go down and night was coming up she was terrified. Savannah thought “oh no what am I going” “to do its dark and I only now my way back in the daylight”. Then she thought what happens if we never get out , what will happen if no one ever finds us again, “what do we do” she shouted. By the time they eventually noticed they were all alone there was no one there. So they thought ok we can get out of this together they started to think back words, like what land marks did I see what objects did we pass. So they thought and thought and thought until one of them remembered.
Savannah said “hey remember the Loop the Loop rollercoaster we road on that last let’s try to find it again then we can just back track from what happened from there”.
So they did just what they said they found the Loop the Loop rollercoaster but then they had an issue they couldn’t remember where they went next. So they sat down to think again they thought ,then they remembered they got a smoothie to drink right before so they found that. So they eventually got back to the gate but then they had a new problem they were locked inside the amusement park, they were horrified yet they could see it coming. So Savannah said “ ok so we are stuck here till the morning let’s try to get some sleep and hope that tomorrow comes soon. When they woke up they were still scared they were stuck there till tomorrow because the sign said “ closed till tomorrow”. They thought its ok were at a amusement park there is plenty to do. So Savannah fixed some breakfast for her and her sister from one of the concession stand. While she was doing that her little sister ran off to go look around when she stumbled across a cord that lead to the switch for the games and rides. She flipped the switch and began to play games. They played ring toss, balloon pop, and many more. When they finally got home Savannah didn’t even notice that they were lost in the first place. When they were at home they thought how could this day get better. There mom was worried when they got home. They both said “ we are ok mom it’s ok were home now no need to worry any more”. For the next week all they could talk about is how much fun it was. So when the day was done they all sat down together and enjoyed a great meal once again instead of the cheap food from the amusement park.
Monday, December 21, 2009
Tuesday, December 8, 2009
Speak Essay
It was the first day of high school for a young girl. She recognized many friends but they didn’t respond. Throughout the book Speak there are have many characters, but there are three main ones that played a role that most people would never think of.
During the book there have been many characters who play a big role but Melinda is ranked on top. Melinda is a character who had a perfect life; good grades, great friends and had a astonishing personality. But her character was in for a loop. It was a dark night and a guy asked her if she wanted to go for a walk. He was a senior and she thought, what could go possibly wrong? Well she was raped and it changed her whole perspective of life. Her grades went down and she never hung out with her old friends any more. It was a tragic incident that changed her life. For example she started to cut herself, she liked to hide in her closet and she broke her mirror. The mirror plays a part with her because it shows that she can't believe what happened and who she has become.
Now even though Melinda was a main key to the story Rachel is also part of it. Rachel’s character is unique because she had many things in common with Melinda. Rachel was a good student like Melinda. There was a big party that went on and that is what changed the whole relationship with Melinda. When Melinda got back to the party she called the cops. That was the night that Rachel’s brother was arrested and Rachel never forgave her for that. Now Rachel’s character is one of the stuck up girls that thinks they are better than everyone. Which proves that she has very low self-esteem.
Even though that Rachel and Melinda had their differences there was one thing they had in common. The one thing they had in common was Andy Evans. Andy Evans is one of those characters that have many issues. Andy Evans is a guy that prays on freshman because all of the older kids in high school knows all about him like who he really is and why no one will date him in there grade. He ties in with Rachel and Melinda because he was the one that raped her and he dated Rachel. Andy is a character that obviously have issues with commitment and himself.
Eventhought there are many characters in the story these three characters play the biggest part. So if you think there are big characters that take part think about what the story is really about.
During the book there have been many characters who play a big role but Melinda is ranked on top. Melinda is a character who had a perfect life; good grades, great friends and had a astonishing personality. But her character was in for a loop. It was a dark night and a guy asked her if she wanted to go for a walk. He was a senior and she thought, what could go possibly wrong? Well she was raped and it changed her whole perspective of life. Her grades went down and she never hung out with her old friends any more. It was a tragic incident that changed her life. For example she started to cut herself, she liked to hide in her closet and she broke her mirror. The mirror plays a part with her because it shows that she can't believe what happened and who she has become.
Now even though Melinda was a main key to the story Rachel is also part of it. Rachel’s character is unique because she had many things in common with Melinda. Rachel was a good student like Melinda. There was a big party that went on and that is what changed the whole relationship with Melinda. When Melinda got back to the party she called the cops. That was the night that Rachel’s brother was arrested and Rachel never forgave her for that. Now Rachel’s character is one of the stuck up girls that thinks they are better than everyone. Which proves that she has very low self-esteem.
Even though that Rachel and Melinda had their differences there was one thing they had in common. The one thing they had in common was Andy Evans. Andy Evans is one of those characters that have many issues. Andy Evans is a guy that prays on freshman because all of the older kids in high school knows all about him like who he really is and why no one will date him in there grade. He ties in with Rachel and Melinda because he was the one that raped her and he dated Rachel. Andy is a character that obviously have issues with commitment and himself.
Eventhought there are many characters in the story these three characters play the biggest part. So if you think there are big characters that take part think about what the story is really about.
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